written in response to a dVerse Poets Pub challenge – to write a Quadrille – 44 words – articulating a ‘breeze’
With a sudden sound
Like the baritone of an irrepressible wind
The persistent sigh of a perpetual breeze
God sang and His breath filled the place
Gifts of fire separated and came to rest
Unifying power and a unifying language
Spoken in ultimate love
– inspired by Acts 2:1-6
Faith Unlocked 
Wonderful! Gorgeous! And so triumphant.
If you’d be willing to let me use this in my Poets United feature ‘I Wish I’d Written This’, please email me at rosemary dot lifemagic at gmail dot com (Spelled out to foil the robots.)
Please do, and thank you so much for your generous encouraging words! God bless you
LOVE this interpretation of the Bible reference.
Love that baritone wind, and persistent sigh.
Very inspiring to read ~
LOVE this poetic depiction of Pentecost!
Sounds like a wonderful wind.